Re- drafted script for final production

Script for final production

(Mid establishing shot of the hallway followed by a non-diagetic fart sound)

Ernie: That ain’t human

Bert: (opens door and a flush sound effect is hear) I got’s to shake this off

                      (Mid tacking shot of Bert walking down the stairs and shaking his body.)

Bert: (sings) shake it off, shake it off (yawns)

Narrator: Name-Bert IQ-low Favourite food-alphabetti spaghetti Blood Type-diabetes

(Mid-shot of Bert walking into the room and closes the door, pans to the sofa as he sits down next to Ernie)  

Bert: Hey Ernie

(close up POV shot from Ernie  looking at a game pad)

Bert: that was so big it hurt, I couldn’t handle it

Ernie: You sicken me

Bert: Say it (pokes Ernie and gets louder) say it

Ernie: (sighs) that’s what she said

Bert: (laughs loudly) oh Ernie you so funny

Ernie: (mumbles) yeah, you so stupid.

Focus Groups.

We had two focus group meetings, we took on board the comments made on the first feedbacks of the introduction of our clip being to long, and lack of variety on shots. Our team looked upon these issues and improved them. the re-draft of our clip made the feedbacks 100% better with more positive comments. The audience was impressed with the added shots. They found it much more humorous and liked the fart sounds which got them hooked. This gratification theory was done successfully and pleased the audience.